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That was
Quite Amazing Steph

Thank you, Sam [:

reminds me of my life.....

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Bumping this cos stephies gonna write more

Ahh I love this poem, glad you bumped it Huge

Me to and its cos of the post deedee started about the personificaton and stephie said she was gonna add to this if shes can find it and i just helped a lil and is falling amber the personificaton to ?

Nah Falling Amber is't personification, I guess the closest thing it is to anything is that its metaphorical for anger, but its not even a real metaphor
&&I saw that post of deedees

Oh my goodness.
Huge, you bumped! =O

I was going to just find the poem(I had posted it, the longer one I mean, on another site... so yeah xD) and post it on the personification post. o.0

*mumbleblushmumble*
I found the edited one...
Here we go.
There's just a couple of extra stanzas towards the end and a few word-changes throughout it.

I once knew a girl,
Who answered to Jealousy.
I thought she was quite a brat,
But all she was, was Jealousy.

Jealousy is a girl,
Whom wishes for something
She will never have,
But something anyone could bring.

Jealousy is a girl,
Who watches him day by day,
With his arm round someone else,
While she keeps her feelings at bay.

Jealousy is a girl,
Who dreams of being tucked underneath his arm,
The other girl out of the way,
Securely protected from harm.

But if this girl goes away,
Jealousy will be no more,
Until some other girl,
Walks through her love's door.

For she only exists,
While her love is with someone new,
She only exists to suffer,
All the way through.

She hangs around with Misery,
Is best friends with Despair,
She's glued to the hip of Heartbreak,
And is a stranger to Fair.

People look down upon her,
They see her as a sin,
They can't understand who she really is,
Who the girl is held within.

I thought she was quite a brat,
But all she was, was Jealousy.
I once knew a girl,
Who answered to Jealousy.