Chapter 1 Cold and Hurting
James awoke to the freezing cold, he hurt all over and he had trouble seeing anything but shapes. "Whaaa....?" He murmured. He scrunched his eye closed and opened them up again, this helped a little, but not a lot. He look down at his bare arms they were a pale blueish colour and he new he'd get to cold very soon. He looked around and saw many bodies laying around, they were bleeding badly and one girl had clearly broken her arm. He saw burns on some people, himself as well. The helicopter lay crashed into the ground and parts were everywhere, there was fire in some places of the chopper.
(I was thinking maybe add another guy or girl. Owen - boy, Devin - Girl, you choose
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