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Hailee frowned. "There's no need to get snappy." She muttered and sat back down on the cold snow.

Ah, I finally got around to returning. Only a year and a half later. Woo.


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"Where are we?" Hailee asked. She shivered and looked around.

Ah, I finally got around to returning. Only a year and a half later. Woo.


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I think we should make it like alternating the person in different chapters, it might seem like a RP if people read this, you know?

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If not, I hope it improves =3
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Yeah, I see what you mean?

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So wanna restart? Have it James, then next chapter Hailee?

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Yeah lets do it.

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Chapter 1 Cold and Hurting

James awoke to the freezing cold, he hurt all over and he had trouble seeing anything but shapes. "Whaaa....?" He murmured. He scrunched his eye closed and opened them up again, this helped a little, but not a lot. He look down at his bare arms they were a pale blueish colour and he new he'd get to cold very soon. He looked around and saw many bodies laying around, they were bleeding badly and one girl had clearly broken her arm. He saw burns on some people, himself as well. The helicopter lay crashed into the ground and parts were everywhere, there was fire in some places of the chopper.


(I was thinking maybe add another guy or girl. Owen - boy, Devin - Girl, you choose smile

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(Works for me, maybe they were blown farther away than the others?)
He struggled to stand, and after failing a few times he finally stood up. What happened.....He opened a crate and found a coat and some frozen water bottles. He hurriedly put on the coat and searched the other crates for food. "Come on, anything....I'll eat anything....." he desperately said. He found a crate full of bananas. "Oh man, I hate bananas." He slumped back down on the blood stained snow.

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(Boy or girl? And that boy/girl is buried in the snow?)

With a gasped James felt his tummy groan, he glanced at the bananas, even those looked good when he felt this way. He bit his lip, his eyes were watering with the hunger and the all over pain. James knew he could go on longer with out food, if he was strong. He dragged himself over to a tree and flopped down, his head and whole body screaming with pain. "Shhh tummy, let me rest first!" He muttered. He cried out with pain and chose to curl up in a ball in hopes of keeping warm, but it only hurt to move and he didn't feel better.

Ahoy there! Hope you're having a good day!
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James slept for about 20 minutes before his stomach woke him . "Ugh, I guess it's bananas for dinner then back to sleep. He walked back over to the crate and looked at the bananas. "Why couldn't it have been apples?" He picked one up, peeled it and took a bite. He took another bite and sat by the still burning remains of the helicopter. He finished the banana and went back to sleep.

Ah, I finally got around to returning. Only a year and a half later. Woo.


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