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 WAR IS NOT WHAT IT IS DEPICTED IN GAMES,CARTOONS OR MOVIES.


'Tis a tale not for those of small hearts or big heads

A song for the dying or the ones already dead

My heart torn asunder by the weight of those i call friend

I did everything they asked of me but not enough

My life my land for something that I do not care for

It was their war I was pushed into not mine

Now I'm blind deaf and dumb and have no use

But I still fight and fight even though my gun is empty

But now I know that its was all just a ruse

It might have been a nightmare but it was sure a scare

I did everything for my life land and country

But now I'm dead what did it ever do for me


                                                                                   
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'TIS TRUE
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Posted about 1 month ago

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“This came to me after 6 days of non-stop brain storming. I have always thought about the man who's being forced to fight other people's fights and now these are my heartfelt condolences to him.”

'TIS TRUE
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Posted about 1 month ago

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Now that is what I call a poem.  Good job buddy!


Posted about 1 month ago

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"Zborne" wrote:

“This came to me after 6 days of non-stop brain storming. I have always thought about the man who's being forced to fight other people's fights and now these are my heartfelt condolences to him.”



Nice forum Wink


Posted about 1 month ago

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cool poem, i like it

''Life is what you make it and determination can overcome even destiny''


Posted about 1 month ago

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great job!!  Keep up the great work


Posted about 1 month ago

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"lovergirl52" wrote:


great job!!  Keep up the great work



Yah true keep it up @Zborne  Wink


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"Zborne" wrote:

“This came to me after 6 days of non-stop brain storming. I have always thought about the man who's being forced to fight other people's fights and now these are my heartfelt condolences to him.”


This is amazing Zborne! Great Job!

It is never right to do wrong in order to get a chance to do right.
-Bob Jones Sr.


Posted about 1 month ago

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Aww thanks.

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"Zborne" wrote:

Aww thanks.


Reply to me plz

''Life is what you make it and determination can overcome even destiny''