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Geography - The Lost City of Atlantis Feedback

Geography - The Lost City of Atlantis Feedback - Reviewed by Kidzworld on Dec 27, 2006
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During the Early Stone Ages a city existed that was so technically advanced it seemed out of a sci-fi movie. In one night Atlantis vanished under the waves of the Atlantic Ocean, lost forever. - Page 3

1 I totally believe it.

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Nickname: Fates
Age: 15

1 The Greeks often used myths to explain what they didn't understand, instead of fact. They used entertainment as a way of life. I believe it could've existed, but then again, we haven't found much evidence. I mean, with our technology you think we would've found something! Like I said, the Greeks were magnificent story tellers, and this could be one of their myths, like Johnny Appleseed is to us.

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Nickname: evenstar06
Age: 15

1 I believe Atlantis existed because all the myths and urban legends I read about really did exist 11,600 years ago. I plan on getting enough money to go on a search for the lost city of Atlantis but first I must retreive the book of "The Shepherds Journal" which really is in Iceland. I know because I have read much information on Atlantis by many men who have went in search for The Shepherds Journal. Atlantis exists and I will prove to everyone that it's not just a myth or an urban legend but once was reality.

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Nickname: iluvshaunmorgan
Age: 14

1 I am Greek. I know that Plato was a philosopher, so much of his writings were not true. But Atlantis, in my opinion, did exist. There is proof that it was part of the island now known as Cyprus, in the Mediterranean Sea.

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Nickname: neaclina
Age: 13

1 There is no proof that Atlantis existed. Maybe there was some kind of lost city, but it's hard to believe that a city so advanced really existed at one time. Egyptians were very advanced for their time but at least there was real proof. There are only stories about Atlantis but no real evidence that it really existed.

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Nickname: mandy1013
Age: 13

1 I think we have no right to say. If there is more than one story to Atlantis, and I read both, they are very similar. You do the math. The real question is... Is Atlantis Greek or maybe a whole different culture worshiping the same gods with diferent names. Like the Romans.

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Nickname: Silver_Explorer
Age: 15

1 I believe in parts of it. Ever since I saw the movie I can't help but think that there's an Atlantis that is under water and I believe in kinda the daughter of the Queen. I know I sound wacked-out but we don't know if there is an Atlantis. So if you think im crazy, fine.

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Nickname: MARIAHFINE
Age: 16

1 I want to think that Atlantis is not a myth. I love Greek mythology and all about the gods and goddesess. I would love for it to be real and for maybe a chance to see it. It sounds amazing. Why can't it be real? Everything can be real if you want to make it real.

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Nickname: iwannabelieveit
Age: 15

1 Atlantis is a myth that is so close to being solved. There are explorers out there right now going on Plato's books and they have found things to back it up! Yes, I think it's real and I know it's real!

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Nickname: kecky
Age: 16

1 Atlantis DID exist... we can tell from the theory and research done. Some of which supports the sinking of Atlantis is how the flood charts over the past few centuries show the Atlantic Ocean has greatly increased in size proving that Atlantis sunk under the waves of the Atlantic.

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Nickname: Cuivedui
Age: 14

What do you think about this almost magical place? Would you try and find it? What would you do if you did find it?

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    XxRuby_PhoenixxX
    ((Get ready for criticism. The grammar is horrible. The capitalization is horrible. I'm a fan of Aphmau, but this whole fan fiction, if you can even call it that, is horrible.))
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    cubicfairy
    kawaii chan p.o.v ​kawaii chan wondered what was wrong with zane, something happened in some kind of dream, she stood up, walking over to the bed and sitting next to zane, he was laying down again "what happened?" she said whilst stroking his hair, he uncovered his face, tears still slowly going down his cheeks "y- you, you killed me..." kawaii chan kept stroking his hair, frowning "kawaii chan would never try to kill zane kun...." zane looked at kawaii chan, and she wiped his tears "I'm sorry.. for scaring you" kawaii chan frowned "you have nothing to apologise for zane kun..." zane pulled down his mask and put his hand behind kawaii chans head and pushed her forwards a bit, kissing her, she kissed back instantly, starting to smile, they pulled away "I love you kawaii chan..." kawaii chan blushed, and so was zane "kawaii chan loves you too" she said, pulling  zanes mask back up zane p.o.v ( skip to a week after 1, the kiss and 2, getting out of hospital, brought to you by twilight sparkle dancing the whip nae nae and yelling "open Gangnam style" XD) zane was laying on the couch, texting kawaii chan happily, he was actually humming, Garroth came over afew times, seeing if he was alright, all happy and stuff (now to the texting!) z- hey kawaii chan, hows it going? k- great zane kun! hows your head been doing? ​z- pretty okay, Garroth keeps telling me not to leave the house for safety reasons ​k- hee, that's pretty funny ​z- well that's what I get... wanna come over? ​k- sure zane kun! kawaii chan will be there in 20 minutes! ​z- okay kawaii chan, take your time ​*zane leaves chat* *kawaii chan leaves chat* ​zane went to his room to get dressed, going in, he saw Garroth scurrying around... well there goes zanes happiness "Garroth! what are you doing in my room!" Garroth instantly stood up, probably only just noticing zanes presence "oh, baby brother, I was looking for my earphones, have you seen them?" "no! get out!" Garroth put his hands in the air, walking out, something sticking out of garroths pocket caught his eye " Garroth, what is in your pocket?!" Garroth sighed "you got me'' he pulled out a photo out of his pocket, it was a picture of kawaii chan and zane at a restaurant from Tuesday (he got out of hospital Monday, its Friday) zane snatched the photo "when did you start getting it on with kawaii chan?" zane grit his teeth " Garroth!," he lowered his voice "please, don't tell anyone, Aphmau and katelyn already know and I asked them not to tell, so please" Garroth nodded "okay" ​(lets just say he go dressed and there was a knock on the door)
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    ThatRandomChick719
    Section Four (How am I writing this so fast?) "... Ahh... A-ahhh..." Mayu had to stop and breathe. She had a killer stitch. She held her left side and wheezed. "This... This is why I don't run..." Once she regained her breath, Mayu examined her surroundings. Oddly enough, not many people were around. "Where could he have gone...?" She began walking again, and she only made it a few steps before she heard a voice calling out for her. "Suzume!" Surprised, and a bit startled, Mayu turned around to see a fellow classmate of hers. "Ah, Shinohara! What brings you here?" The bubbly girl beamed at Mayu. "Ah, I'm waiting for Naomi. We are supposed to meet in this exact spot, and then we are going shopping! What about you?" "Oh, well... I'm trying to find Shig. See, he got this phone call from Mochida, and apparently Kishinuma got in a really bad fight. I'm worried about both of them--" "Correction, Suzume. You're worried about Morishige." "That's not true! You know I care about both of them!" "Hehe, I know. I'm just messin' with ya. So... That's why you're all sweaty. Were you running?" "Yes! It's awful, Shinohara!" "Well, I luckily have a water bottle with me. You can take it." She smiled and handed the bottle over. "T-thank you!" "No problem! Now... LET'S GO FIND OUR FRIENDS!" "Wait, what...?" Mayu took a giant gulp of water before continuing. "Uh-huh! I'm gonna help you find them! YEAAAAAH!" "Are you sure? It sounds kind of dangerous..." "Ahem." Shinohara tried her best to imitate Mayu's voice. "'Anything for Shig-nii!' Isn't that right? Hmm? I respect that, and want to help! Plus, Kishinuma is involved. A DOUBLE WHAMMY." "...Once again, thank you." "Think nothing of it!" Then, all of a sudden, Shinohara brought her fingers to her mouth and whistled loudly. A taxi shortly came over and stopped. "Thanks, mister! Now... Direct the guy, Suzume!" 
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    ThatRandomChick719
    Section Three "Kishinuma! Unhand me this instant!" Morishige didn't raise his voice, but his tone was like a hiss. He wasn't messing around.  "Because I don't have time for this, either. But Mochida was too frightened to confront you. So he contacted me. And I'm delaying my plans for this. Therefore, both of our lives would be simpler if you release me." The blond-haired teen didn't let go of Morishige, but loosened his grip on him. "Oh, yeah?! Well, you don't even know what happened...!" "So... Take a deep breath and calmly explain the situation." Kishinuma did as he was told, and inhaled. Then exhaled. "Okay... So it was a normal day on the job. I didn't have much to do when it happened..." "What exactly DID happen?" "...Shinozaki stopped by to visit me. It was like... The first time ever. And I was... Well, that doesn't matter. We were just chewing the fat when suddenly... A gang of thugs showed up. They busted the windows and doors. Their leader was a real stick, and he took her. He had duct tape, and he silenced her screams with it. They had rope, too. Tied all of her up to the hood of their pretty little blue truck. And I was mad." "...So you went after them?" "HECK YEAH I DID! Those jerks weren't gonna get away with any bull crap on my watch!" "I see. What happened afterwards?" "What do you think happened, Morishige?" "You initiated combat. I know. I mean the details." "...I gave em all shiners, for one thing. Dang them! They had it comin'!" "Kishinuma... Calm down, alright?" "..." "We'll find her, so don't worry. Now, why don't you lead the way? Take us in the direction they went." "...Fine." With that, the two began running off.
    reply about 8 hours
    ThatRandomChick719
    Section Two Mayu was still waiting around for Morishige to come back. They had plans for that afternoon, and that's why they hadn't left right away. They were supposed to rehearse together, and he thought it would be best if they did it in a setting like that of the scene. "Mayu, why don't we do it in the classroom after school? The scene takes place in a classroom, after all. Doing it this way will allow us to get into character a lot easier, don't you think?" "Yeah, that's a great idea!" "Excellent. We'll start once everyone departs. Good?" "Mhm... Good." Mayu's face became hot when she remembered how... light she felt. It was always strange... Whenever she talked to him, it was like she was lighter than air. Like she was floating. And yet... her heart was heavy enough to bring her back to the Earth when he left. That's how she felt now. "Ms. Yui... Do you think everything will be okay?" "Of course, Suzumoto! Morishige is fine on his own. Isn't he always?" "...Yeah... You're right." She began thinking to herself. "He doesn't need me..." "He never has." "He never will." "But... That's one of the things I like about him." "His independence." "He's a lone wolf. He could be trapped in a haunted setting and make it by on his own." "But I would be the first to die... Because I would need someone with me." "...Shig, in particular." Ms. Yui noticed Mayu and her sad expression.  "Oh, what's wrong? I thought that would be reassuring... I'm sorry." "Ahhhh, no, sensei! It's not your fault at all! I'm just... Um... Worried. That's all." The small girl abruptly stood and gathered her belongings. "I am gonna head out! See you tomorrow, Ms. Yui!" Without waiting for a response, Mayu ran out the door and through the hallway. She was sprinting and losing her breath.  But she couldn't stop. She had to keep going. "He needs me... I know it."
    reply about 8 hours