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Characteristics of Fall

Characteristics of Fall - Reviewed by Kidzworld on Dec 27, 2006
( Rating: 1 Star Rating)

Characteristics of Fall | Teen Poetry | Fall Poem | Autumn

The leaves have fallen now
Leaving the limbs on which they have fallen from bare
Cluttering the sidewalks like scattered toys
Causing the ground to disappear

Soon winter will be here
To lay its white blanket on everything in sight
Leaving fall in it's shadow.

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Nickname: Tene'
Age: 12

1 Not bad but not great.

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Nickname: Mooncharm
Age: 15

1 I luved it! Keep writin'!
Buh bye,

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Nickname: punkrockchick
Age: 14

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    Fave Season? Vote!

    • Summer cuz no more school!
    • Fall is pretty.
    • Winter means snowboarding!
    • Spring means warmer weather.

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    Fairkss
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    nqme
    nqme posted in Debating:
    I appreciate it, but that doesn't help my conscience.  To me, you're practically saying "if one of us dies, that's okay because there are still plenty of other humans all around the world".  I don't put other animals above us, of course, but they still exist.  Anyway, good day.  Enjoy this egg's before  [s:p/1n9v] and after  [s:p/1n7e] because I'm not sure how to say "good day" without sounding sarcastic.
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