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Characteristics of Fall

Characteristics of Fall - Reviewed by Kidzworld on Dec 27, 2006
( Rating: 1 Star Rating)

Characteristics of Fall | Teen Poetry | Fall Poem | Autumn

The leaves have fallen now
Leaving the limbs on which they have fallen from bare
Cluttering the sidewalks like scattered toys
Causing the ground to disappear

Soon winter will be here
To lay its white blanket on everything in sight
Leaving fall in it's shadow.

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Nickname: Tene'
Age: 12

1 Not bad but not great.

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Nickname: Mooncharm
Age: 15

1 I luved it! Keep writin'!
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Nickname: punkrockchick
Age: 14

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