"Pipercottontail" wrote:Name: nikita
Height: 5' 3"
weight: 135 lbs
looks: long black hair with braids here and there and blue eyes (duh) and long thin lips
bio: was forgotten when the tribe was attacked by a beast now lives alone with her brother scavenging for food
Personality: strong and confident, and brave almost fearless her flaw is that she can't feel love after her tribe abandoned her
magic vessel: none
other: call her kita
in my opinion, I ink you should have a better flaw. From a short perso, you can already tell confidence means hot temper, but sometimes, not feeling loves is actually a very good thing, so try something she is deathly afraid of. I think if you keep this form, you might end up godmodding, and I do not wish this to happen, but this is only my opinion, and only a short word of advice, don't follow it if you don't wish to, I'm just suggesting a better powercap.
"You can't change anything unless you can discard part of yourself too. To surpass monsters, you must be willing to abandon your humanity"-Armin Arlet
5000th post 8/3/13