Yeah, I'm not in the mood to copy and paste my usual list of rules, just write actual sentences and don't make it all about yourself. Also, I would like to ask that yo do not make your character know everything. For example, if your character's love interest is having an affair, please wait a while before exploiting it. As long as you follow these things you're alright with me.
Form:
Name
Age
Looks
Personality
Why the person ran away
Things they packed
Name: Carrie Quinn
Age: 17
Looks:

Personality
Why did they run away?: Carrie's parents had recently passed away, and she did not want to live with pious and strict grandparents.
Things they packed: Clothes, food, her ukulele, and a necklace from her mother.
Name: Hank Donalds
Age: 18
Looks:

Personality: Hank is a sarcastic guy with a tough and rugged exterior. He acts as though a fighter plane could not penetrate him. He loves to argue with people about everything anytime anywhere. Inside though, he is a caring, sensitive guy. He truthfully cares for his friends and family, and loves to give advice to them. Along with these things, he also has a passion for reading and writing. He dreams to one day write a best-selling novel of his own. He does have some issues though. He has anger problems that he believes he has under control. Still, he is very irritable, and will snap when you tick him off. He is also very athletic.
Why did they run away?: He felt like he was misunderstood at home, and he figured that since he was now 18 it would be the best time to leave everything behind.
Things packed: Just the money from his bank account.
Embrace love. Don't choke on it like Squidward!



Just with dirty blond hair. He has an eye patch for his missing right eye.









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