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CHARACTERS=============================================================== Rhyen-Me Jay.J- My best friend(girl) Jordien-My best friend (girl) PLOT======================================================================= when you walk donw the tracks, about 5 minutes theres a beautiful lake and than 10 minutes there is a bridge that we love to hang out at. and then 10 minutes to my house ======FIT THIS INTO THE STORY LINE========================== TRAIN BRIDGE.................WALKING HOME FROM SCHOOL....................HANG OUT AT THE BRIDGE............ BIG STORM WHEN THEY GET HOME............... JORDIEN AND JAY.J STAY THE NIGHT AT RHYENS................  STORM LASTS 2 DAYS.............OVER FLOWING RIVERS,LAKES,IDEA 1=======================================   Three Teens were walking to their favourite hang-out spot, the train bridge. The train bridge is a nice spot 5 minutes in from the road, it is everything you imagine to hear and see when in the woods away from everything. A Quiet, open, wooden bridge high above a river surrounded by woods and rocks. the sounds of the water currents hitting rocks, birds singing, tree's rustling, bridge creaking. Rhyan, The only guy of the three, lived the closest to the bridge. The bridge was Rhyans favourite place to be, he liked to be alone and away from everything, including his parents and siblings who always fought with him.  Jay.J, One of the two girls, has been Rhyan friends for a long time and loves going to the bridge with him, they like to go on adventures there.  Jordein Is a friend to Rhyan and Jay.J, But Jordein doesn't like going to the bridge as much as them.  Jordein, Rhyan, And Jay.J were walking home from school, it was a Thursday afternoon and tomorrow they had the day off. The three walked home on the tracks as usual, because it takes a shorter amount of time going the tracks instead of on the road IDEA 2===============================================              Rhyen, Jay.J, And Jordien were walking home from school on a thursday afternoon. Beautiful day, sun is shining, sky is clear, and the tracks are clear. The three friends walk the train tracks home because there's so much to see, and it saves about two hours of walking...

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I...am not sure I follow.

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"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

I...am not sure I follow.

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I Need Help Writing A Story.. Please Help

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"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

I...am not sure I follow.
I have all these Ideas for this story, but I just can't write it....

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I got that part, but what do you want us to do about it?

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I don't know, like write a sentence

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"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

I got that part, but what do you want us to do about it?
HI MELI I LOVE YOU! ...Back on topic, wut ._.

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? I just wrote two. And look, here's two more.

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"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

I got that part, but what do you want us to do about it?

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Jay. J and Jordien are walking to go meet you, when they get there a big storm forms and you have to spend a night at your home. There. You're welcome.

YOU KNOW WHOS COOL? T3R3ZI PYROP3! H3H3 > : ]


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