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musicbabe
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Whenever I hear your voice it reminds me of defeat, speak no longer sad one, bow down before my feet, listen to the story, of the time I told you so, think of the memories we had long ago, swords and weapons didn't win the war, it was my words that I had spoke to the lord, explaining your lies, you said I was foolish, but now I will rise, I was never unaccepted, but my words were unexpected, you can still feel the pain, now you bow before me sad one, and sit under the rain

~ Love, musicbabe ~


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musicbabe
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I hope that you guys liked this poem. Please comment to tell me what you thought!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


Posted By:
musicbabe
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Just to let you guys know this is a confusing poem but if you read it over and over again it will start to make sense! If not tell me so I can explain it to you!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


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Really good. You should try putting it in stanzas though c:

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Posted By:
musicbabe
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"-KellinQuinnsAngel-" wrote:

Really good. You should try putting it in stanzas though c:
Thank you! And yeah, i know but i couldn't get it to work!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


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