Kw-logo-smaller

Random

Poetry & Stories
Show your creative writing side to other users.

Defeat

Posted By:
musicbabe
musicbabe
Member since:
March, 2013
StarStarStarStar
Status: Offline
Posts: 104
Whenever I hear your voice it reminds me of defeat, speak no longer sad one, bow down before my feet, listen to the story, of the time I told you so, think of the memories we had long ago, swords and weapons didn't win the war, it was my words that I had spoke to the lord, explaining your lies, you said I was foolish, but now I will rise, I was never unaccepted, but my words were unexpected, you can still feel the pain, now you bow before me sad one, and sit under the rain

~ Love, musicbabe ~


Defeat

Posted By:
musicbabe
musicbabe
Member since:
March, 2013
StarStarStarStar
Status: Offline
Posts: 104
I hope that you guys liked this poem. Please comment to tell me what you thought!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


Defeat

Posted By:
musicbabe
musicbabe
Member since:
March, 2013
StarStarStarStar
Status: Offline
Posts: 104
Just to let you guys know this is a confusing poem but if you read it over and over again it will start to make sense! If not tell me so I can explain it to you!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


Defeat

Posted By:
-KellinQuinnsAngel-
-KellinQuinnsAngel-
Member since:
March, 2013
StarStarStarStar
Status: Offline
Posts: 917
Really good. You should try putting it in stanzas though c:

Banner


Defeat

Posted By:
musicbabe
musicbabe
Member since:
March, 2013
StarStarStarStar
Status: Offline
Posts: 104

"-KellinQuinnsAngel-" wrote:

Really good. You should try putting it in stanzas though c:
Thank you! And yeah, i know but i couldn't get it to work!

~ Love, musicbabe ~


play online games

Candy-100

A great online version of the famous Candy Crush. This is the best game launched...

Big_icon_(7)

Have you ever fancied being a ranger like those fantasy characters you love so m...

Hour-of-code-tumb

Millions of Students will be doing an Hour of Code with Tynker December 8th-14th...

Big_icon_(4)

You run across the city in a car chase with the police officers.

Big_icon_(6)

The evil master kidnapped all of your friends!

latest forum posts

Type in the face you have on right now

if u were to live in a book which one woul...

if u were to live in a book which one woul...

Post a Number with your eyes closed

what is your first name

what is your first name

latest videos