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so this is my poem for my writing class' poetry slam tommorow,please give me feedback and thankssmile
"Breakfast"
I always wake up to food
It seems to set my mood
It's either waffles or pancakes
Hash-browns or mancakes
And what is a waffle without syrup?
I must have syrup or else it'll take like a turnip
Syrup,syrup,syrup,I'm missing you today
I might as well go eat breakfast in may
I love you dearly
Turnips merely
I must have you today

I live in America and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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its not what you'd normally expect of a poem and btw mancakes are large pancakes

I live in America and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko


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This thread should be in "Poetry & Stories" category.


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Nice one! smile


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"RawrSkittles=)" wrote:

This thread should be in "Poetry & Stories" category.

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Thanks Gracie for moving this. smile


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that is such a nice poem and you send it to me if i add you as a friend please smile smile

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I like it smile 

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thanks i worked #### ## it smile

I live in America and I love anime.Here's what I wanna say to you : BLUE CHICKENS AND MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Toriko
One of my favorite animes
toriko


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Were making poetry stuff in our class too... just finished up or rought drafts today, god I hate sonnets.

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