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I hope you like it :3

Click. Click. Click.
Mia turned over in her bed. This stupid noise had been bothering her.
Click. Click. Click.
She couldn't sleep. All she could do was listen to the rhythmic clicking. It was almost hypnotic.
Click. Click. Click.
"Ella? Ella?" She whispered into the darkness.
Ella groaned in her bed. "I was sleeping! What's wrong now?"
Mia sat up. "I can't sleep. Can you hear it?"
"Hear what?" Asked Ella.
"That clicking!"
"Wait.." Said Ella, getting out of bed, "I can.. Yeah. IT'S YOU DRIVING ME CRAZY STUPID!"
Ella stomped out of bed and turned on the light. "Listen, Mia. There's NO NOISE. Go back to bed." And with that, Ella, climbed back into bed, muttering to herself. 
But Mia could still hear it.
Click. Click. Click.
Quietly, she stepped out of bed, and slowly crept out of her and Ella's bedroom... To be continued


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It's a great start, Catherine! It reminds me of the arguments that people have in the story book that I'm currently reading xD


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This reminds me of the Mysterious Ticking Noise on Harry Potter Puppet Pals lol.


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This is good xD

Someone once told me not to bite off more than I can chew. I told them I'd rather choke on greatness than nibble on mediocrity.


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I love it! But I want to hear more, so can you post the next part soon? Also, I really like the pug licking the window.


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