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imagination44
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April, 2013
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I can hear my heart pounding in my chest. Thump-thump-thump. Loud as a drum in my ears. My mouth is dry and my lips are cracked. I strain to sit. I can't. Where am I? The room is a bright white. I'm tucked in up to my neck. Everything is shaky. I want to puke but my muscles won't allow me to sit up. A small child is sitting in the bed next to me. She has stopped breathing. BOOOP BOOOP BOOOP. Loud sirens sound. Dr. Holly to room 340 please. Dr. Holly to room 340. Thank you. Intercom shouts. "Uhhhhh," Is that my voice? No. It is though. A nurse, a lady build tall and thin strode into the room. Her long dark hair fell onto her shoulders and her deep as the ocean blue eyes looked at me caringly. "Ah, Bobbi is it?" She asked. I wanted to ask her where I was and who I was but all I could do was stare blankly. "You may have so memory loss." She smiled a sad smile. "I'm Joann. Can you tell me what this is?" She held up a laminated picture of a fuzzy smiling creature. What.... I have no idea what that thing is. "This is a teddy bear," Joann said. She picked up another picture. This one was a big half circle of maybe seven colors. "This is a rainbow," Joann said. This is going to take forever! shouted a little voice. It sounded like it was coming from my own head..... Poor girl! said the little voice. It was sadder this time. What is going on?!     


Oh darling, don't be bitter. It's the first instinct of the weak.


Stuck

Posted By:
imagination44
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13 views and no one posts? I will only continue when 20 people look at this. Frown you people make me sad.


Oh darling, don't be bitter. It's the first instinct of the weak.


Stuck

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cuty muty
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April, 2010
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got stuck with a song


Stuck

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QTpie14
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March, 2013
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Alot of times in my writting, 50 people look and no one post, maybe cause their speachless to what you wrote....

I could walk but I dance, I could talk but I sing, I could smile but I laugh and I could think but I dream.

THIS IS MY SIGGY :P HA HA HA HA

Four a thought in my head I have three things two words five people going ONE DIRECTION....smile

be yourself...never let someone change u!!!

:P making these faces are addicting :P smile Big Grin Frustrated Wink Tongue


Stuck

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hugebear
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"QTpie14" wrote:

Alot of times in my writting, 50 people look and no one post, maybe cause their speachless to what you wrote....


This ^^.  I loved what you wrote so far smile

[QTpie14  I love reading your writing /stories but I doesnt always post cos I does not want to fill up the thread with kind of the off topic comments] 

Some people like reading but they does not want to comment for loads of reasons and it would be awesome if we got the like button so we could show we likes what was written without posting.  

I hope you write more smile 

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brunostar
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February, 2012
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Smile Nose

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Stuck

Posted By:
QTpie14
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March, 2013
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"hugebear" wrote:

"QTpie14" wrote:

Alot of times in my writting, 50 people look and no one post, maybe cause their speachless to what you wrote....


This ^^.  I loved what you wrote so far smile

[QTpie14  I love reading your writing /stories but I doesnt always post cos I does not want to fill up the thread with kind of the off topic comments] 

Some people like reading but they does not want to comment for loads of reasons and it would be awesome if we got the like button so we could show we likes what was written without posting.  

I hope you write more smile 


Yes smile

I could walk but I dance, I could talk but I sing, I could smile but I laugh and I could think but I dream.

THIS IS MY SIGGY :P HA HA HA HA

Four a thought in my head I have three things two words five people going ONE DIRECTION....smile

be yourself...never let someone change u!!!

:P making these faces are addicting :P smile Big Grin Frustrated Wink Tongue


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Gingerkissx
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Interesting Big Grin I'd like to hear more!

A lot of people just like to read without commenting. Personally I don't usually comment unless I have something I really want to say about the story, that way the comments mean more than just "cool story"

"hugebear" wrote:




Some people like reading but they does not want to comment for loads of reasons and it would be awesome if we got the like button so we could show we likes what was written without posting.  

 


I think that's a good idea.



Ginger|Melissa




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