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Life has been a journey
That seems to come to a dead end
You only think about now, how you are alone
How you silently drift out of humanity
You''re fading, fading, fading

Throughout the depressional cuts
Thoughts of suicide appear
When you take a look in the mirror
You don''t like what you see
You see someone fading, fading, fading

All emotions are vacuumed out
Except that of hatred
Although there is no one to hate
Except those who know the truth
But they can''t stop you from fading, fading, fading...


I wrote this when I was going through a depressional stage. Please rate.

xthis poem and also the one in my sig are going to be featured in a book ''Immortal Verses'')

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ur pretty good very deep love it i''ll give it a NINE!!!!!! oh yea look at ur ''i''m movin friend liks my bf'' topic

bethanyy,
i''ve maturedd,,
i''m living a messed up life.
i''m confusingg,,
i dunno where i am.
my friends know who they are,,
the day you''re born you begin to die.
the brave dont live forever but the cautious dont live at all.


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Thank you. Ya, with me moving and all that i''ve had a lot of emotions. And also my parents are having maritial problems. But ya, its the only treatment that works for me, writing. I''m not to good at writing poems but i love writing little life notes ya kno wat i mean

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I rate it a nine too. It''s really good. I would rate it a ten but i never rate anything a ten becuz i dont think anything is perfect. Good Job!!

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i give it a nine good poem loved it!!!!!!!!

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What is up with all these nines peoples..Im givin it a TEN!

That really touched me!

The end

Toucie


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thank you !! !! !! Ya I really love writing and wow...haha...thanx again ! !

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deep id say 8

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Ya srry..im brn_eyez..just a new name

thank u everyone

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6/10, I didn't really get the imagery n stuff... a 6 is above average. Keep it up.

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