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Posted almost 11 years ago
Life has been a journey
That seems to come to a dead end
You only think about now, how you are alone
How you silently drift out of humanity
You''re fading, fading, fading

Throughout the depressional cuts
Thoughts of suicide appear
When you take a look in the mirror
You don''t like what you see
You see someone fading, fading, fading

All emotions are vacuumed out
Except that of hatred
Although there is no one to hate
Except those who know the truth
But they can''t stop you from fading, fading, fading...


I wrote this when I was going through a depressional stage. Please rate.

xthis poem and also the one in my sig are going to be featured in a book ''Immortal Verses'')

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Posted almost 11 years ago

ur pretty good very deep love it i''ll give it a NINE!!!!!! oh yea look at ur ''i''m movin friend liks my bf'' topic

bethanyy,
i''ve maturedd,,
i''m living a messed up life.
i''m confusingg,,
i dunno where i am.
my friends know who they are,,
the day you''re born you begin to die.
the brave dont live forever but the cautious dont live at all.


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Posted almost 11 years ago
Thank you. Ya, with me moving and all that i''ve had a lot of emotions. And also my parents are having maritial problems. But ya, its the only treatment that works for me, writing. I''m not to good at writing poems but i love writing little life notes ya kno wat i mean

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Posted almost 11 years ago
I rate it a nine too. It''s really good. I would rate it a ten but i never rate anything a ten becuz i dont think anything is perfect. Good Job!!

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Posted almost 11 years ago
i give it a nine good poem loved it!!!!!!!!

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Posted almost 11 years ago
What is up with all these nines peoples..Im givin it a TEN!

That really touched me!

The end

Toucie


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Posted almost 11 years ago
thank you !! !! !! Ya I really love writing and wow...haha...thanx again ! !

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Posted almost 11 years ago
deep id say 8

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Posted almost 11 years ago
Ya srry..im brn_eyez..just a new name

thank u everyone

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Posted over 10 years ago
6/10, I didn't really get the imagery n stuff... a 6 is above average. Keep it up.

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