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Okay, well this story is based on the horror film Orphan, but not copied. I hope you enjoy. Part 1 "So, we're getting a new sister?" asked Bella excitedly at the thought. "A brother or sister," replied her mum, Jane. "Do we really have to? I mean it's not like she's ever going to be like Lily," complained Alex, Jane's other son. "Alex!" cried his dad. "What, I mean it's just a fact-" "I know that. I am going to forget the past and think about the future," replied his mum, taking a deep breath. Her husband smiled. When they arrived at the Orphanage, it was full of playing children. The walls were covered in orange bricks and there were flowers under ever windowsill. "This looks like a lovely place," said Bella, clapping her hands. "It does, darling," said Jane. Alex agreed, but didn't say anything. When they walked in they were greeted by a young woman. "Are you Mr. and Mrs. Foster?" she asked. "We are indeed, but call us Jane and Daniel," said Daniel. The woman smiled. "Would you mind me letting the children play outside my office for a bit? I mean we need to talk in private," the woman asked. "Of course," said Jane. "Bella! Alex! Play out here for a bit, while I chat to this lady!" "I don't want to play with this silly baby stuff-" started Alex, but stopped when he saw his father's face. Bella, however grinned at all the toys and started to play with them happily. "So, what has made you decide to adopt a child?" asked the woman, whose name was Emma. "Well, we had a little girl, Lily. She died before she was born and we've been very upset for a year now. Then, we realized we could adopt so we thought this would be a good option," said Jane. "Okay, then. Let's show you who we've got."


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no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR

dyfgfgfg


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Great.


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"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
Have you even seen Orphan? Rated 5 stars, best horror movie of the year a while back. It gets more gorey afterwards, this is just the beginning.


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Ummm, I'll read chapter 2 oright. See if I get eny interest

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"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
It's very good, and it's the complete opposite of boring! P.S, what does TLTR mean? Too long to read? o.o


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"GawjussGracieex" wrote:

"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
It's very good, and it's the complete opposite of boring! P.S, what does TLTR mean? Too long to read? o.o
Uh huh, yep it stands for Too Long To Read

dyfgfgfg


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"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
How the heck is that too long to read? It's like a paragraph and a half.

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"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
How the heck is that too long to read? It's like a paragraph and a half.
I've got a KILLING stomach ache, so stop bothering me.  And it is TLTR

dyfgfgfg


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"Year4fan9046" wrote:

"-LadyOfTheWood" wrote:

"Year4fan9046" wrote:

no offence but storys like dat are boring. TLTR
How the heck is that too long to read? It's like a paragraph and a half.
I've got a KILLING stomach ache, so stop bothering me.  And it is TLTR
Your stomach isn't my problem. And it's not too long to read, it's too long for YOU to read. Just because you're too lazy to read through all of it doesn't mean it's too long, and you're insulting the author by saying that.

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