It was so good i mean i would steal your writting brains and replace yours with mine!

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It was so good i mean i would steal your writting brains and replace yours with mine!

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Thanks so much everyone.

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Thats deep and i really liked it, it can really change someone, thnx  GOOD JOB

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Thanks. Im working on chapter 7 now.

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Chapter 7- Tears, Lies and Secerets Bridgette. I drove home with the radio so loud, I couldnt hear anything at all. I went to my room. I begin crying. I really wanted to be with him. He just hadnt given me the chance to explain why I wouldnt make love with him anymore. I grabbed my cell phone and called Ray. No answer, I sighed but I did leave a message.Ray. I heard my phone ring, but seeing that it was Bridge I ignored it. After a while I decided to call her back. We talked for a while. When I got off the phone, I thought maybe I shouldnt have ended things with her. I would waited about a month or so before trying to get back together with her. If she really wanted to with me that bad she would prove it.Steven. When I found out that Bridgette and Ray had broke up I was very happy. Maybe she wont go back to him I thought. I texted her to find out why although I pretty knew why. I sighed when i recieved her answer. I just decided to keep things to myslef. Because at the party I heard some of the guys talking and they thought Ray was with another girl at the same time he was with Bridgette.Bridgette. After about two weeks of being seperated I couldnt take it anymore. I felt like crap and would have done anyhting to be Ray’s girl again. I eventually got the chance to hang out with him and talk things over. After a while we began dating again. But something was different I felt it. Summer quickly arrived and we had plans to go on vacation together. So one night when we were on vacation with his parents, he was in the shower and his phone kept ringing. I eventually checked his phone, it some girl named Sabrina calling him, I told her that I was his girlfriend. She said no she was. I threw his phone across the room. When he came out of the bathroom. I told him what happened and he said "That he was going to break things off with her as soon as he found out if we our relationship was going to work...

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OMG love it!!! I cant wait for more

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"vanillacupcake454" wrote:

It was so good i mean i would steal your writting brains and replace yours with mine!

^^^^^ That! All that! ( = 

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like wow. this story was really good. i read it and liked it. if u get the chance tell me the title so i can tell my sis. she would love it. unless u wrote the story yourself

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Really great! Hope you write more

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