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Welcome to the Garden of Poems and Sories. Here, You can write any poem or Story you like, and then Get a Ranking of 1-10, There will also be Monthly Garden of Poems and Stories Contes xComing Soon) So write all your poems and stories Here. I''ll be sure to rank them.

Come Agian Soon


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Come On Ya''ll Post Your Poems Here, If You wanna know what ppl think


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Okay this is a poem my frined wrote, not me! Tell me what you think and then I''ll tell her! I think its great!!!

xxxx align=''center''>Warrior
See the silence in his face,
the utter sadness.
For he is fighting in the place,
that is always full of madness.
You can see the love in his dark blue eyes.
Lie the sky above,
full of mysterey and wise.
He is down in a valley.
Not knowing when it will end.
He is fighting for his country.
He is a warrior till the end.

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My dream is to be a writer! My role models are Eoin Colfer, J.K. Rowling, Christopher Paloni and Daniel Handler [Lemony Snicket.] I write storys for fun and think it''s great! I love to write! Writing is my life. When I have a bad day I''ll go home and lose myself in a book that I am writing or a book that someone else has wrote. My imagination is so wide and in order to make room for the so called "important stuff" like math, history and science [LOL] I have to write down my story''s on paper. Remember to always follow your dreams and maybe just maybe if you try hard enough they could come true!
Read my posts on here called "Dayz in a nutshell! Tell me what you think!!", "Dayz: Book 2" and "A new story I am writing!" Tell me what ya'' think! And there is also a story where you can add on to called "A story you can add on to." Check it out!
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Wow, that deep, and good! i give it a 9, wad ya''ll think?


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9.5. very well-written. tell your friend she has talent.

Harry Potter is my life, and that is all i have to say.

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She''s beautiful, but she doesn''t mean a thing to me.



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this is my poem:the heat in summer its summer and i cant believe that i start to stick to my sleeves my head is hot and my brain has melted nothing ryhmes with melted but as you can probaly see it does not really bother me.


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so??how do u rate it


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idk heres one i made up now im a bit rusty but here it is

i see how you stare
but i don''t really care
i''ll go my own way
it''s this girls way or the highway
i have my own way
you have yours
we do our best
as we explore
as i travel yonder
and as i ponder
i think of my hopes and my dreams
while you hopelessly think of nasty schemes
your so tied up in my business
so just get a life
just get with it

That''s it ! i''d give it a 7-9 maybe :P

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Psalm 97 :
1, The LORD reigns , let the earth rejoicex Let many islands be gald.
2 Clouds and thick darkness surround Him xRighteousness and justice are the foundation of His throne .
3 Fire goes before him and burns up his adversaries round about .
4 His lightnings lit up the world x the earth saw and trembled.
5 The mountains melted like wax at the presence of the Lord of the whole Earth .
6 The heavens declare His righteousness,
8 And all the peoples have seen his glory
7 Let all those be ashamed who serve graven images,
Who boast themselves of idols x Worship Him all you gods .
Zion heard this and was glad , and the daughters of Judah have rejoiced
Because of your judgments,
O Lord .
9 For you are the LORD Most High over all Earth x


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i give it 8 or9


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Hamster - I say a 7, the poem brings you back to reality
CoolGirl- I say uhhh 8, I think its good!


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