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Vanessa Shay
Vanessa Shay
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Posted almost 4 years ago
Hi! I'm Vanessa. Not to brag... I am a junior author.I got my story published in a book. Blush Anyways! I just LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE to write! I like reading too. If you want an honest opinion or some tips reply here with your writing. I would be really honoured to help you. If you want my opinion please don't be angry at me if you don't get something positive. I will be really honest. Add me as a friend if you like! Wink

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Vanessa Shay
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Posted almost 4 years ago
Hi! may I hepl you?????????????

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Posted almost 4 years ago
Roses Are Red Violets Are Blue In Soviet Russia Book writes YOU!!

how how how how how how how how
what how


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Vanessa Shay
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Posted almost 4 years ago
It is pretty good though I would add some feelings

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Posted almost 4 years ago
Here is a little poem i wrote , please share your opinion.                                      Title:no i wont! once there was a girl named tiffany,her mom loved to nagg her,brittany, tiffany hated chores,when she was nagged she said,no i won't, the house got dirtier the next day,mom was mad tiffany wasn't afraid, but one day the hous was black with mold and tiffany shouted no i won't, whe would scream and pout,so her mom kicked her out, and when she could come inside the house she had to run back out, the house was collapsed oh no, and it was so dirty that the construction workers said,no i wont!   write back smile

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Posted almost 4 years ago
Roses are red Violets are blue In Soviet Russia Poem writes YOU!!

how how how how how how how how
what how


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Vanessa Shay
Vanessa Shay
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Posted almost 4 years ago
Dear choco.luv,           I really like your poem but I would work on the punctuation otherwise I really like the idea and the poem

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Posted almost 4 years ago
THANKS! ^.^

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Posted over 3 years ago

"Vanessa Shay" wrote:

Hi! I'm Vanessa. Not to brag... I am a junior author.I got my story published in a book. Blush  
What's the name of the book?

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Vanessa Shay
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Posted over 3 years ago
The book is enitled Talented. If you want to have a look on it, it will release in December 2012. You will have to wait if you wanted to read it!

A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words.


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